ANALYSIS OF STUDENT WORK

Analysis

In 'Surface,' a thriller project created by students, there are many micro elements that are effective in supporting the conventions of a thriller however there are relevant aspects that are missing which could enhance the viewers enjoyment. This thriller opening sequence has the convention of a crime being at the core of the narrative as the viewer gets to see a distressed girl being kidnapped or hurt by what seems to be the antagonist, in which is shown through the different combinations of Micro elements.

Clearly, the use of cinematography is very important in this opening and is apparent in the use of of close ups however because close ups are consistently used there is a lack of variation in distances which does not meet the criteria. This lack of variation does not keep the viewer on edge and tense even though the consistent use of close ups is used in order so that the opening would not give to much away and therefore make it tense and dramatic it fails to take into account that the repetition becomes a bit tedious.

Editing plays a very important role in this sequence, in particular the use of cuts has a very important effect in establishing a tense and weary atmosphere. The use of what seems to be blood in water slows down what is happening and also allows the titles to be shown while making the viewer tense and nervous by then cutting back to what is actually happening extremely fast in which surprises the viewer and puts them on edge. This is put into use after approximately 15 seconds of the man trying to kidnap the girl and just as the viewer wants to see more it cuts back to blood in water. The blood in water is slowed down extremely and the girl being kidnapped is played at a faster pace. This contrast has a very good effect on the viewer as they don't quite know what is happening.

Sound has a massive effect on the viewer in this thriller opening. The criteria of using sound with images appropriately is clear in this sequence as the non diagetic sound that is used contributes substantially to making the viewer on edge. There is a soundtrack that is played throughout the opening that is calm and mellow when the blood in water scenes are in use but then gets amplified as it then sharply cuts back to the man and girl. It then gets mellow and calm again as it then cuts back to blood in water and this order is repeated through the opening. The sound bridge between these scenes in which you can hear the diagetic sound of the girl screaming creates a connection that makes the viewer know the girl is in peril and wants to keep watching to find out what happens.

Mise en Scene does not play a significant role in this opening as the shots that are used do not establish the man and girls surroundings as the students are trying not to give anything away. The only clear use of props that is apparent to the viewer is of the mask and hoody that the antagonist is wearing which helps keep the identity of the kidnapper hidden as it is clear that this lack of identity plays a major story line in the thriller.